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  • Just want to share some of the stuff I write...

    So please, turn on your literacy caps and have a read.


    I pull inspiration from many things, from events, other songs and writing to the very people around me and I see all the time to even something as menial as a conversation said in passing.

    Many of my work is set to a tune only to help myself write them and to keep everything in a specific rhythm. Also, everything I write is constantly changing and evolving, either to help with the flow of the piece or to simply rearrange it into something I am actually happy with. Some of you may recognize some of the songs/pieces as I have posted them before, but some have changed dramatically since then.

    Anyway, I hope you enjoy.





    This is a more recent piece, drawing inspiration from a particular firearm I own...

    1893

    I wish I could tell stories that grasp ones attention
    But my words get lost in a confounding intervention
    There is one marvelous piece of history that I possess
    One whose stories will never cease to impress
    A firearm manufactured over a hundred years to date
    Not far from my home in nineteen hundred and eight
    Every piece inspected and meticulously hand fit
    The gunsmith’s unique fingerprint
    Over the years the finish has been slowly fading
    Wood soaked in oil and slowly disintegrating
    It still locks up tight and goes right to the shoulder
    Light as a feather and as staunch as a boulder
    When I hold it myself, I wonder and adore
    The many other souls that have used it before
    Not as a prize, a trophy, or treated like a fool
    It was, to many before, nothing more than a tool
    Nothing more than an object to harvest the meat
    Small game and the like in the forests of wheat
    A history unspoken; assumed with its complexion
    Though to it, I am without that sort of connection
    It’s such a grand firearm with a lavish history
    And on this day it starts a new Era with me
    My very own Marlin Model Eighteen Hundred and Ninety Three





    While exploring some of upstate New York, we came across a piece of machinery hidden away from view and I worked on this piece on and off for a little while, describing the condition that we all found it in.

    The Engine that Forever Sleeps


    Built to last to the end of days
    It was born in a shallow grave
    Men toiled to complete
    Something rendered obsolete
    Within time, nothing lasts
    Rusted metal, growing grass
    From between the piston rods
    Rotting since the engine stopped
    Entombed in its own Catacomb
    Its place of birth, it’s only home
    Built to last to the end of days
    An Engine born in a Shallow Grave
    Polished metal, oiled and greased
    Now filthy rust and decaying trees
    Concrete Pipes Rustic Stanchions
    A cold, refined Cobblestone Mansion
    The Pinnacle of Technology
    Rushing water to electricity
    Now the moss slowly creeps
    On the Engine that Forever Sleeps





    This is one of the few pieces that was inspired by a simple conversation with someone else about a girl who loves to write down everything in her diary.

    Sealed

    A sealed book wrapped in leather
    A scribe so fine and as light as a feather
    Many pages blossom with happiness of years
    While some are burdened with the stains of your tears
    But in those dark hours, riddled with strife
    Or in those bright days; the best of your life
    Always remember to inscribe in those pages
    Words and memories worthy of the ages
    Your first taste of a dessert or your very first kiss
    Tell the pages of your sorrows and of your bliss
    And when the pages become black with ink
    Be taken aback, please stop and think
    Your life was worth every written word
    Every adjective, every subject and every verb
    Cherish your life and never regret
    Keep that book close to your heart and never forget.



    One of my first works from many years ago, it has remained unchanged now for almost 5 years.

    Sunshine Lane

    A brisk bright day on a street corner there
    Stands a twelve-foot high street sign, cold steel and bare
    Next to it, the flower shop surrounded by angels and flowers
    The street sparkles with life in the bright daylight hours

    Sunshine Lane is the name, no one would ever forget
    It never gets too hot and when it rains, it never gets wet
    Such a perfect place to live, a dream of the heavens
    A magical place between Bellevue and West Devon

    Sadly, that is not the case nor has been for years
    Sunshine Lane is now the street that everyone fears
    Drug dealers run rampant, pollution overloaded
    Dead animals in the streets and all the signs corroded.

    Black hats and trench coats is the only attire
    Nothing there is friendly, nothing there to inspire
    Burning cars on the sidewalks and down electric wires
    The central swimming stream is now nothing but a mire.

    And on a cold heartless day on a street corner there
    Stands a twelve-foot high street sign, cold rust and bare
    Next to it, the flower shop, boarded up and abandoned
    It isn’t even worth looking at, not even a glance while standin’.



    This song is a joint collaboration between my mother an I, painting a picture with words the House my grandparent's used to own when they were alive and living in Bridgeport, CT and the neighbors they had.

    Porches

    A bland house from the street and not much to the passerby
    Surrounded by ones just like it that wouldn’t catch your eye
    The families didn’t mind as they would’ve rather gone sight unseen
    And off that house great porches shaded by a massive Evergreen.

    The porch on the first floor is where Frank and Peggy sat
    Eating some fresh sandwiches and having themselves a chat
    Peggy would twist needles and knit herself a sweater
    And Frank would scan the papers, enjoying the warm weather

    The rustic porch on the second floor was home to Eddie’s throne
    A lawn chair had for many years and worn right to the bone
    A quick drag on his cigarette and plume of smoke arose
    And a gentle breeze would blow the ashes onto the drying cloths

    Kathleen would comb her hair and pluck her eyebrows in the sun
    The pot would be a screaming lettin’ ‘em know coffee was done
    Then Eddie would try to reason with her and try to explain
    Why the car shouldn’t be washed upon the morning of the rain

    Good Ol’ Jack McGuire, he’d come tottering up the drive
    Sipping at his whiskey and trying to stay alive
    He’d come pissing vinegar and swinging the cane he had
    ‘Cause the Brits imposed that curfew when he was just a lad.

    And even when November came and chilled the autumn breeze
    The cousins would don their winter vests and critique who they please
    They’d laugh and cheer and prod and sneer at all the poor fools below
    As they walked unknowingly through the cold December snow

    Soon the spring would come and whisk the dreariness away
    And Eddie would tend to his garden and be there every day
    Sometimes he would gaze upon the house in a peaceful way
    For those would be the porches on which his grandkids would soon play

    Great castles built of sweat and stone that towered above the trees
    All had grand halls, massive rooms and endless libraries
    Where one can sit and ponder all of life’s great mysteries
    But all the castles of Ire never had porches quite like these.






    This is where stuff starts to get fun. This song has evolved so many different times it is hard for me to tell what brought the first glisten of inspiration.

    Assault on the Senses

    Pound the ground or bring the pain
    We leave your Dead behind and reign
    Raze the buildings and raise the rocks
    To the roar of thunder and lightning shocks

    Through your Darkness we Preserver
    We are the Light you where Born to Fear

    Artillery blasts burn the hollow sky
    A disheartening symphony to our Battle Cry
    And with the Drums blaring from behind
    You will cower to our Anger, divine and refined

    War Chants, Death Hymns; Never Disappear
    We are the bellow you’re Afraid to Hear

    Our soldiers stand ready waiting for the Assault
    While the magma erupts from under the Black Basalt
    Destroying the unruly evil blocking their way
    And they’ll slay the wounded set in disarray

    Constantly Advancing, We shall Never Yield
    We are the Death you will Never Feel

    The Air becomes thick and much harder to breathe
    The poisonous gases make your feeble mind Seethe
    Rotting corpses add to the scent of disgust
    And the caustic vapors turn your Soul into Dust

    Don’t Breathe in - the air’s already Stale
    We Lay the Fumes you’re Afraid to Inhale

    Upon the Horizon the Blood Sun Fades
    Hiding our Forces in the Mountain’s Shade
    With the Darkness our Force is fully Released
    There’s no way to stop our Nocturnal Beasts

    The Tenebrous Colossuses Rampage at Night
    We are the Shadows Burned in your Sight

    Our Ruthless Campaign will Toil for Years
    Assaulting your Senses and Enhancing your Fears
    We won’t stop until your Army is Erased
    We Claim the Victory that you’ll Never Taste.




    I tinkered with the old Irish saying May we be in heaven for a half an hour before the devil knows we're dead and it eventually became this.

    The Guns of Killarney

    In City of Killarney, just east of Dingle Bay
    A tyrant came a walking, and settled here one day
    He brought along his minions, a legion of despair
    We tried to get him to leave, but wouldn’t go no where

    Corruption ran rampant, and nothing could be done
    But it had to end when the mothers would lose their sons
    So a band of us young rebels, and armed to teeth were we
    Set off to save the people and the city of Killarney.

    So may God look down and recognize we tried
    And may the devil burn in hell and never know we died

    All of us good Catholics, all loyal to the Green
    As we loaded forty fives, into the magazines!
    We asked for his forgiveness, the prayer was no mistake
    We hoped that He’d forgive us for the lives that we would take

    We all dressed up in solid black and left our humble abodes
    And took ourselves and the guns onto the cobble roads
    As we lined up at his door, the tyrant began to run
    That’s when we turned night to day with flash of Thompson guns!

    So may God look down and recognize we tried
    And may the devil burn in hell and never know we died

    The tyrant laid a bleeding, gasping for a breath
    And then came his minions, alarmed by his death
    Their numbers grew immensely, but we wouldn’t have defeat
    The guns went blazing, unto the city’s streets

    The battle raged for hours, a sight no one should see
    Bodies lay strewn upon the streets of Killarney
    People tried to stop it, they would cry and they would plead
    But all their voices drowned out by the machine gun symphony

    So may God look down and recognize we tried
    And may the devil burn in hell and never know we died

    We stood and fought together, fighting in the fray
    Sadly though we wouldn’t see the sun rise the next day
    The band of us young rebels, immortal we shall be
    Because we killed that Tyrant and saved the City of Killarney

    Now there stands a statue, a block from where we died
    To tell of the sacrifices to all those far and wide
    And under that bronze statue a plaque that goes and reads
    “Six men holding Thompsons, the Guns of Killarney”

    So may God look down and recognize we tried!
    And may the devil burn in hell and never know we died!
    So may God look down and recognize we tried!
    And may the devil burn in hell and never know we died!




    Everyone knows that childish 'Yo Ho A Pirates life for me!' song, well, I thought I would take a few key words from that song and turn it into something more sinister and more demonic, painting a true portrait of who pirates really were.

    Dead Pirates

    Not many people can tell you the tale
    Of blood thirsty bastards under a black sail
    We made our home on the wide open blue
    We would have done different but that’s all we knew

    Marauders of our town and thieves of the Few
    We hijacked a ship and assembled a crew
    Our souls were as black as the far ocean’s deep
    If one of us died, no one would weep

    We made it our mantra to simply cause fear
    As we lived off the sea and from pier to pier
    We were no heroes, no saviors of souls
    We searched for no treasure, we hunted no gold

    We pillaged we plundered we raped and we killed
    We burned every building the red coats had built
    We had a good run and lived for a while
    And that’s why I tell you we died with a smile!

    We would land at each port and burn it to the ground
    And let the whole world know when we were around
    We’d storm the Grand Navy and fight for our lives
    We’d fight to the death - but we never died!

    We’d kill every man and tear the captain apart
    We’d cut open his chest and hold up his heart
    Drinking the blood as if it where Rum
    Even the Devil had all of us Shunned

    Well it took the Old Crown at least ten dozen men
    To finally capture us and then that is when
    Marching to the gallows we broke out in song
    We told all those bastards what we had done wrong

    “We pillaged we plundered we raped and we killed
    We burned every building you bastards had built
    Go ahead; please tell us our lives are a disgrace
    But all of us will die with a Smile on our face!”

    We garnered no sympathy for pirates were we
    Blackening the pages of your history!





    Well, that is what I feel like posting for now, maybe I'll post some more stuff tomorrow...
    Last edited by Buffalo Phil; 05-23-2010, 08:39 AM.
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    some good reads there, man.
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    • #3
      can you write a poem about me
      No worries, I'm not actually back, I'm just reminiscing about the old days.


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      • #4
        Originally posted by JeepBabiiXJ View Post
        can you write a poem about me
        Sure Zullo.
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        • #5
          awesome...

          thats some good stuff phil. why not make an attempt at going some ware with it? send it to a publishing place? or are you not really interested in that?
          #becauseJoeNitro

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          • #6
            Not bad dude, impressed with the descriptive qualities of it.

            I see what you mean when you called it poetry/lyrics, the cadence and rhythm each ones has makes you sing it. You get a and from me
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            • #7
              Very good stuff.
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              1998 XJ-sold
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              • #8
                Thanks guys for the compliments.

                Originally posted by JoeNitro View Post
                awesome...

                thats some good stuff phil. why not make an attempt at going some ware with it? send it to a publishing place? or are you not really interested in that?
                I'm just not sure how to really approach it really. Maybe I'll look into it if and when I have the time to pursue it, but for now it is just something I like to do.
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                • #9
                  Bang up job chap
                  1996 xj, waggy 44 front 5.13 gears aussie trussed, 3 links, 3.5" coils, spooled 8.8 rear, 38" tsl sx's, tnt front bumper, jesus freaks rear bumper, Olympic top hat roof rack, bunch of dumb shit
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                  • #10
                    Thanks, RJ.

                    Originally posted by Hydra View Post
                    Not bad dude, impressed with the descriptive qualities of it.

                    I see what you mean when you called it poetry/lyrics, the cadence and rhythm each ones has makes you sing it. You get a and from me
                    Maybe I'll sing some at the next meet.
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                    • #11
                      good stuff as always
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                      • #12
                        Some more...

                        My Government.

                        There is a timeless saying that old soldiers never die
                        Some things never forgotten no matter how hard you try
                        In eighteen seventy two the Frankford arsenal gave birth
                        To the little government after proving what its worth

                        Adopted a year later in eighteen hundred and seventy three
                        It was loaded in the trapdoor from the Springfield armory
                        And though for only nineteen years it walked down soldier’s road
                        Even with a century past no one forgot the load

                        A cast lead slug point four five wide
                        Seventy grains of power hidden well inside
                        Tall staunch brass standing side by side
                        This is my government the one that never dies

                        Man and beast both large and small have fallen to its feet
                        Even fighting in foreign conflicts it rarely saw defeat
                        It soon became immortal as it helped tame the west
                        Bringing down the mighty buffalo and settling civil unrest

                        And still today the government retains its strong tenacity
                        Even with its limited range and its arched trajectory
                        And with today’s advancements we must still give the cheers
                        To the cartridge that’s been with us for one hundred and thirty years

                        A cast lead slug point four five wide
                        Seventy grains of power hidden well inside
                        Tall staunch brass standing side by side
                        This is my government the one that never dies




                        My Insanity

                        I’d never thought I’d see the day
                        When I’d be walking home on a dreary day
                        See myself striding right beside me
                        My insanity

                        I’d never thought I’d see the day
                        When the telephone crashes into the plane
                        I felt like there was nothing there
                        But it was all beside me - all next to me
                        My insanity

                        My bed is spinning stop the ride
                        The 12-gauge shotgun by my side
                        Prevent myself from hurting me
                        He’s standing next to me
                        My insanity

                        I’d never thought I’d see the day
                        When I’d be walking home on any day
                        To see myself striding by my side
                        With such lies
                        My insanity

                        Treacherous mountains in the snow
                        Watching the owls’ iridescent glow
                        As they continue to fly towards me
                        Helping me
                        My insanity

                        Ripping tearing killing my soul
                        I'm my own sniper on the grassy knoll
                        I better stop myself it's taken its toll
                        It's up to me
                        My insanity

                        Broken homes and shattered bones
                        I'm Buried in twenty five feet of snow
                        In a place where no moon will glow
                        And I have died still by my side
                        My insanity

                        My insanity




                        I wrote this one (as with some others) with a Brogue on the mind...

                        Just not for Me

                        I was walking to the church one morn to put a clean slate on me soul
                        When I stumbled upon the likes of her and me heart began to roll
                        She was an angel from the heavens and a queer bit of a skirt
                        So I sprinted right up to her side, and we began to flirt!

                        I asked her for a date that night and she replied with a smile
                        So I skipped the mass that morn and ran home all them miles
                        I prepped myself up great and dressed myself up really sharp
                        And got myself all ready for the evening’s lovely larks!

                        They tell me to get out there, so many fish to see
                        She’s the only one I wanted, but she’s just not right for me
                        She’s the only one I wanted, but she’s just not right for me

                        I took her to a nice place right there down in Dublin Square
                        She had the most beautiful smile on and perfume in her hair
                        But right as we arrived she started to flirt with the bartender
                        That took me heart and ground it in the bottom of a Blender!

                        But I let the pain subside and then she ordered another round
                        I took a sip and reached for a kiss and that’s when she shot me down
                        So I paid the tab thinking this date was nothing but a ruse
                        But when she said she had a lovely night, she left me all confused

                        They tell me to get out there, so many fish to see
                        She’s the only one I wanted, but she’s just not right for me
                        She’s the only one I wanted, but she’s just not right for me

                        She told me we should leave so we could spend some time alone
                        But when we got my front door, she then decided to go home
                        I asked her what was wrong as I stood there quite fatigued
                        She said I was the sweetest guy but I was no where in her league!

                        T’was this woman who drove me to drink until I got sloppy
                        And I never had the courtesy to thank her for the deed
                        So every night I think of her me heart begins to bleed
                        Then I whisk away me sorrows with me favorite Whiskey!

                        They tell me to get out there, so many fish to see
                        She’s the only one I wanted, but she’s just not right for me
                        She’s the only one I wanted, but she’s just not right for me
                        Last edited by Buffalo Phil; 05-22-2010, 08:32 PM.
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                        • #13
                          Phil, bravo champ

                          97 TJ that I think is pretty neat.

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                          • #14
                            I can't wait for the one about Zullo!
                            Is it egg nog season yet?

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                            • #15
                              awesome stuff phil
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